Mest 4 Coursework

Working title My text was Wonder Woman which was released in 2017. The working title for my project is "How do films such as Wonder Woman reflect the changing representation of women in Hollywood movies?".  Angle My main topic is "The changing portrayal of females in movies" which I will be focusing on throughout my project. Hypothesis In my perspective, I do think that the portrayal of females in movies have changed because if you compare the portrayal of females in films in the 20th century with the portrayal of females in films in the 21st century, there has been a drastic change in the way females are portrayed in mainstream films nowadays. If you look the film "Planet of the apes" which was released in 1968, the film portrayed the female actor as a very weak and helpless character showing how the films back in the 20th century really objectified females. However, now you can see a huge change as mostly in the 21st century, a film like "Wo

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each category.  Significance: 4 Structure: 2 Simplicity: 3 Rehearsal: 1 10/20 Nice opening - a little nervous but lays out the text and topic really well.  Presentation clearly researched well - structure is reasonably solid but too ambitious. There's too much to get through for each slide. This suggests a real lack of rehearsal.  Discussion of representation between comic and movie is an interesting line of enquiry - worth exploring further.  Objectification + strength - two different things ? One to discuss further in the essay.  Wider examples excellent - the #likeagirl campaign fits brilliantly with the wider media debate.  Structure not entirely helpful to audience - seems to jump around concepts and debates quite randomly. This needed better organisation - a critical skill for the essay.  Again, trying to do much here.... Institution to audience to mise-en-scene: any of those could have ta